Let’s re-write the example above into a profile that will make a quality man take notice…New: “Most days of the week you could find me unleashing my inner child as a marketing consultant for Disney. Today I am going highlight some of these mistakes by taking some poorly written online dating profile examples, and show you how to re-write them into profiles that quality men will be extremely attracted to. If you want to get noticed online, you have to stand out from the competition and catch a man’s attention. Whatever you write in your profile should always be used to highlight your best qualities. The truth is, I’ve been reading profiles for close to a decade, and most women tend to make very similar mistakes that could easily be avoided by following the right profile writing advice. For starters, this is a cliche statement that will blend in with the next 100 profiles.One of the best compliments a woman can ever receive is when a guy tells his friends, "She's awesome.She's like one of the guys." What guy wouldn't want to bring his girlfriend around his friends and feel totally comfortable?The more bait you leave, the more likely men will message you without skipping to the next profile. If you want to stand out from the crowd, reveal your personality in a unique way.Instead, let's change the phrasing above to, "When I'm not out with my friends on a Friday night, I love curling up under the covers and watching a scary movie (any suggestions? Many men and women unintentionally use language that displays a lack of confidence.
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But the manner in which this profile is written will send all the wrong signals.
This profile example comes across as needy, negative, and creates the impression that the profile writer may have had bad experiences with online dating in the past.
By changing this statement to, "the perfect man for me is smart, fun and handsome," the perception completely changes.
This subtle change portrays the image of a woman who is confident, in control and knows what she wants. It is a huge mistake to create a massive list of turnoffs, deal-breakers and qualities that you are looking for in a partner.
The key to your profile is to attract the ones you do want by appearing to be a happy, fun-loving person.